I wish you had asked me before using my song...
Sorry, it's just I'm really not a fan of madness animations. This one I didn't mind as much, and the song kind of fit anyway - it's just that Madness has always just seemed bad for newgrounds to me.
Wonderfully put together.
The animation was just terrific - the little things too, I remember being particularly impressed with the beared shopkeeper. The music and sound was also really well done, with the grim version of Teddy Bear's picnic adn everything. Top notch work!
I was kind of getting a Nightmare Ned vibe from this, especially with the music.
The show is a success
Because it shows what newgrounds users really are. They no longer care whether these episodes are any good or not, it's part of the series, so vote ten.
It was a static image with people arguing over it. Not evena funny argument. This is not a ten.
You should be proud, you wonderful human being.
It feels like Pico was holding you back.
The animation itself was great - especially the little things like how the characters ponytail moved and her body language in the beginning. However, it feels as if working with other characters was limiting what you could do. I think we won't get to see your full potential till the newgrounds holidays are over. To be completely honest Pico and buddies felt almost shoehorned in.
Gross-outs are not horror
I didn't really find any of this scary, which is obviously what you were going for. The animation was okay, but there really wasn't much of it, and the light dimming/brightening gets a little annoying. I could see what you were going for, but substance is much spookier than style.
Now that was animation.
It was impressive as all hell. There isn't really much to review here, as it was more a concept piece. You certainly succeeded at what your were attempting though, terrific work.
It was nice
And certainly most agreeable, however the actual animation was a bit bland. I would suggest trying to add a bit more style to your future work, as the only thing letting this down is blandness.
Amazing for one reason:
You were able to be random and creative and fucking stupid without it being forced. Too many Vasquez and knox-inspired artists think random numour comes naturally, when in fact it takes a lot of sense to be nonsensical in a funny way. Bravo!
The actual animation itself was great,
however I think you may benefit from altering the fram rate. I could see some really excellent fbf stuff in there I think most people wouldn't notice (such as throwing the tooth brush into the cup). The actual movie was very nice, a lot of emotions at play there, with the most prominent being a mixture of nostalgia and regret. A great movie and I look forward to seeing more from you.
haha thanks yeah i remember being particularily proud of the toothbrush bit. The framerate is actually 24fps but I did all the fbf on 2's (basically at 12fps) to save time. One day when Im famous I can ressurrect this and my other animation in stunning 2d wonder, for like a 10th anniversary or summit lol
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